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ILLUSIONZ_LOL
05-03-2006, 10:08 PM
NEVER SAY........

NEVER SAY I LOVE YOU

IF YOU REALLY DON'T

NEVER TALK ABOUT FEELINGS

IF THEY AREN'T REALLY THERE

NEVER HOLD MY HAND

IF YOU'RE GONNA TO BREAK MY HEART

NEVER SAY YOU'RE GOIING TO

IF YOU DON'T PLAN TO START

NEVER LOOK INTO MY EYES

IF ALL YOU DO IS LIE

NEVER SAY HI

IF YOU REALLY MEAN GOODBYE

IF YOU REALLY MEAN FOREVER

THAN SAY YOU'LL TRY

NEVER SAY FOREVER

CUZ FOREVER MAKES ME CRY.....

ALWAYS & FOREVER



SOMEDAY.....

SOMEDAY YOU'LL CRY FOR ME

LIKE I CRIED FOR YOU

SOMEDAY YOU'LL MISS ME

LIKE I MISSED YOU

SOMEDAY YOU'LL NEED ME

LIKE I NEEDED YOU

SOMEDAY YOU'LL LOVE ME

BUT I WON'T LOVE YOU.



Poetry

What is Poetry?Who knows?

Not a rose, but the scent of the rose;

Not the sky, but the light in the sky;

Not the fly, but the gleam of the fly;

Not the sea, but the sound of the sea;

Not myself, but what makes me

See, hear, and feel something that prose

Cannot: and what it is, who knows?

-Cetlali



Losing Serenity

Serenity Rodriguez passed away.

I didn't want her to go so soon.

We'd been friends since first grade.



The burial was

Thursday evening

at the Old Bellevue Memorial.



Serenity

always had something to tease each of us about,

like Dan

sleeping through readinf class,

and Jeffrey,

who on his speed-writing test put

an "even ton" of children

instead of an "even ten"



Serenity said good-bye to each of us

in her own way.

She gave me a picture she'd made before she went away,

it was her on a ladder at her beach house,

She was staring out at me;

Sometimes I just can't let it be.

She was more than a friend to me,

she was like a sister

I handed Serenity the memory book

we scribbled in.



Serenity

stayed on Earth somehow.

I can still feel her presence;

I can still feel her bliss;

I can hear her laughter;

I can see her smile.



I'd give anything to talk to her for alittle while



Now Serenity's gone North,

out of dust;

out of greif;

on her way to Heaven;

where the wind takes a rest;

where the angels do their best.

And I'm wondering what kind of friend am I,

letting her candlelight go out that awful night.



I loved my friend;

I loved my sister.

There's nothing more to say,

she went away from me.

The poem ends,

soft as it began---

I loved someone who was more than just a friend;

my childhood sister---

Serenity Carolina Angel Rodriguez "SCAR"

-Cetlali

tigergirl1980
05-25-2006, 11:53 PM
I just wanted to say I liked your poems they had alot of feeling in them, which is the main ingredient for a good poem! You could tell they were truly from the heart...sorry for your pain I think everyone can relate to losing someone close to them I know I can. Keep pouring out the poems they might get you somewhere someday!


Lori

ArIzOnAGiRl
05-27-2006, 04:59 PM
wow very nice.

chic*chica908
07-28-2006, 11:30 AM
wow, these are...really good. I mean REALLY. hope you keep on writing

Robbajr
08-27-2006, 05:16 PM
Hi I'm Robbajr and I would like to say that's awesome, ur very deep.:D

LittleDevil_KissingTheSky
09-10-2006, 01:50 PM
wow those r straight forward and to the point. i love them all! man i wish i could write like that!!

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