Do You Write Poetry? Have Something To Share?

[MELANIE@BLINKYOU]

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My name is Melanie and I will be the moderator of this forum. Please feel free to to post here and share your unique creative poems and song, or anything else you may write. Also, feel free to offer suggestions to users looking for help if you know the answer to the question they are asking! As always, please keep it clean, and do not post any personal information such as address or phone numbers!:)

[emoromance]

I just wrote this last night.....its probably not great but i like it. =)

Falling,grabbing, heart pounding with fear
the life being destroyed, and she didnt hear
spinning and swirling, in her head full of regrets
confused and alone she sits and forgets
feelings of loss, hate, and suspense
why, is the only word that makes sense
why her, why them, trying to cope
tugging and pulling, giving up hope
she couldnt look back to her days of youth
badness, sadness, moments of truth
he wouldnt listen, his mind layered in lead
the battle raging on in her head
she had to fix it, stained fragile hand
to care too much, she didnt understand
what has he done, just a life full of lies
confused and alone, she sits here and cries.
come back please she begged on i need her
i've lost her, shes gone, her voice was a blur
dying inside, blackened hearts cry
shes cant come back, a lonely goodbye
pain is the essence of life, she was dying
one last thought, she dreamed she was flying
away from the pain, that has cut her so deep
as she layed herself down, in soft silent sleep
praying that she'd stay in this state till whenever
the next time we'd meet, would be never
she had gone, left me here alone
just another girl, undiscovered, and unknown
a souless body, an empty heart
because of a family, a life, torn apart.

[Jax]

:fishy: Emoromance ..... that was really quite good. Don't sell yourself short, you do have talent.

[babyqnz4me]

remember when you liked me
remember when you loved me
remember our first date
remember when you cared about me
well i remember it all
the first time i met you
i thought you was in my heart for life
i loved you more than words can say
some time i dream about what our children would be like
i dream of our wonderful white wedding we would have
i dream what my life would be like with you

[z_unxpected]

We’re born to live and then we died
That’s life and I won’t lie
From sky we came and there we go
And that’s a fact that everyone know

No one will live forever
Death is something we must admit
We shouldn’t fear death, people
But we must work for it.

Those who died are still alive
And they’ll always be in our heart
Those who died are still with us
And leaving them will be so hard

Theirs souls are everywhere
Lighting our life with the blessing they own
Their picture is in our mind
As bright as the sun rising after dawn

One day we’ll meet those people again
With a bright smile on our face
Walking on the floor of heaven
Where our souls live and stays.

Don’t be sad, because the sky is happy
Don’t you see that it’s bright?
Someone special met it today
And left Earth last night

Don’t be sad, we still didn’t loose them
We just can’t see them yet,
One day we’ll be together
‘Cause they were the greatest we’ve ever met.

[pretty_n_pink21]

that was a great poem

[yvonneml62]

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Exploded destruction rips to shreds
and tosses heaping piles of confusion throughout
Torn pieces of flesh pulse and ache in a child, this child
Quick and sure reality
Pictures of ugly evil and pitiful sakes
Forbidden tracts stomped and ruined
Hurt so deep and wide in a child, this child
Terror and fright kicks and fights a child
An iron child
Make believe? No! a child, this child
Intruders brutal force pain so keen
A piercing pain, iron child's fierce return
Laughter, grabbing and stabbing pain
Lust entangled, a madman? games?
Insane! a stone cold reaction fuels anger
In action, an iron child, a child, this child
Worlds pass in and out
Reality? rage? terror? Pain? racked with confusion in a child
Spread out to be devoured, a child Yes! this child, an iron child

[adorkableme]

you took away my happiness,
you only added pain.
you took away my childhood,
my fortune and my fame.
you took away my smile,
my smiles are now tears.
you took away all hope,
replacing it with fear.
you dont know what you did to me,
for that i keep inside.
you dont know of the pain,
the reason that i hide.
you dont know of the scars,
created late at night.
you dont know who i am,
you dont know how i die.

[LittleDevil_KissingTheSky]

wow that was good and it applys to many things that have happened to me in the past... man keep writing...

[adorkableme]

tnx i have alot more... i have a website 2... i haven't updated it but its: whatever.nandgate.com

[lil_GG]

my life is S:) welcomed to in that riches of my hands:flying:

[STARGIRL254]

yes i do i write poetry whats your email i am gianna from pa gswimmer2440@yahoo.com

[*Iris*]

A gentle breeze dances with the leaves
Pale moon light passes through the tree's
A lovers gaze, a warm embrace
I feel my heart begin to race

Leaves falling to the ground
The gentle sound of a water fall
playing in the back round
A lovers touch, a tender kiss
Passion unfolding a lovers bliss

A gentle mist fills the air
You run your fingers through my hair
Caressing my lip's with a sensual kiss
Our bodies enter in to a sensual bliss

A blanket lay on the ground
Candles burning all around
your body softly caressing mine
Our spirits become now intertwine

[lonesometonight]

wow that was good and it applys to many things that have happened to me in the past... man keep writing...

[QUOTE=LittleDevil_KissingTheSky]She lived next door and schoolboys were nervous around schoolgirls and schoolgirls were nervous around schoolbys_accept your parents-keep trusting them_they DO make mistakes_you'll have a long life.

[wishybear02]

that was extremely inspiring. more counselors could use this to help others think through alot of their problems it was absolutely beautiful and breath taking. wishy

[urgrlnxtdoor]

wow! It was great dont think its not good. If u like it then it has to have meaning and thats wat catches ur readers (love the emo romance though)It was perfect to me

[joker4lifead]

you took away my happiness,
you only added pain.
you took away my childhood,
my fortune and my fame.
you took away my smile,
my smiles are now tears.
you took away all hope,
replacing it with fear.
you dont know what you did to me,
for that i keep inside.
you dont know of the pain,
the reason that i hide.
you dont know of the scars,
created late at night.
you dont know who i am,
you dont know how i die.

really good poem it reminds me of what my friend cuz went through
:fishy: :fishy: :fishy: :fishy:

[joker4lifead]

i have so many poems i want to add them but....

[martinaluther]

Great poetry.
Thanks for sharing.

[doyl1314]

PLEASE GIVE ME SOME CONSTRUCTIVE CRITISISM. :)


The China Bridge

delusion dead
against an azure sky
pure morning dew
sax glow
toward jazz lit night
feasting piano.

quiet moments
gentle into her hands
under intent of long hair,
ecstasy of Spirit
births existence
ecstasy of being.

Carved with fields of fashion
a china bridge
brought to life
stone and cedar
under flows
‘The Brook of Ablution’.
She hopes of her lover,
thoughts of stars
murmuring sanctuary praise
against an azure sky.

[doyl1314]

Waiting a Windless Park

adoring eyes
voluble mind
sober
waiting a windless park
evening train
so to arrive.
aware
a child
The Abandoned Engineer,
upon an ancient relic
unmovable,
black,
plain painted
decked and docked
dipped in a new grave.
The Abandoned Engineer
moving a differed plane
waiting a windless train.
aware.
she's upon my presence
darkness
my figure, speechless
shadowed,
full of gray,
in hollows
where fantasies borne
drawn and unbroken
blueprinted personal tender
better left to midnight cemeteries.
eyes voluble
mind aware
silent
waiting a windless park.
her glance
a smile slight
brevity
soft prose
deep,
easy,
alive.

[doyl1314]

The Spirit CaféLush blight

momentary light
sliver of a fresh door
warm searching
warm forged
delicious and strange
how it is to feel
purge of her face,
gracious glance
rebirth within her eyes
(To have such a look!)
sociably
amazing tender arms
firm, light grip
warm face
upon cold face
sudden
scented hair
soft air
broken gentle
from slight parted lips.
Entranced
carefree response
at the Spirit Café
moment in time
reserved,
for two
eternal.

[doyl1314]

(for Suri)

lavish disclosure
ebbing breath
silenced abiding.

Sighs of release
swathed in soft color
heavy Holy purple dreams.

Minds feigning fairytales
From blueprint test tube worship,
parents truly graced to bear
and hold you.
Choice speaks: ‘ Of what Light from yonder window break!’
Truth
lets you silently
revelate
revolutions
in an incompetent world.
Low persons arise
dust off,
world in flesh and blindness.
So, this distant
bittersweet brother writes,
one who is taken upon
many broken paths:
Mend time a pilgrimage
gladly lend might,
young poets of natural being.
Silent revelator
of life
genuine from Holy Counsel.

[miunatit]

very nice poem. I can not make poem because i`m not romantic person.
Its very good. give me some thing.

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