I think (poem)

[Bubbiesdeployed]

I write a lot but don't normally post things where people I don't know can read them because i never think anything is good enough but here it goes! Tell me how it is. =] Thanks! If you have tips feel free to add them in too!







Do you know what it feels like to be dried up inside.
When you want to give up, so you don't even try.
When your heart feels like ice and your feet feel like coals...
Its at this point you know you won't reach your goals.
Your eyes are all teary, you can't even blink..
If anyone knew it would be you i think.

Copywrite (c) 2007 Amber Good

[jessesboo321]

well i think that was a pretty good poem that u did and that i dont judge it


I write a lot but don't normally post things where people I don't know can read them because i never think anything is good enough but here it goes! Tell me how it is. =] Thanks! If you have tips feel free to add them in too!







Do you know what it feels like to be dried up inside.
When you want to give up, so you don't even try.
When your heart feels like ice and your feet feel like coals...
Its at this point you know you won't reach your goals.
Your eyes are all teary, you can't even blink..
If anyone knew it would be you i think.

Copywrite (c) 2007 Amber Good

[Bubbiesdeployed]

Thank you =]

[urgrlnxtdoor]

WoW!!! I loved it!! I really think that u should not be so self concious about ur writing it is really great. Also a tip for when u r writing; I listen to music, It makes a lot of ideas pop up in my head and u dont get stuck on words as easily.

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[joker4lifead]

it was good. i did the same thing as u but my sophomore teach read a few and she said they were good. Every since then i write and post things on myspace,here or another site.
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[willywilly99]

Nice poem man
keep t up