my peom "laying alone once again"

[jessica615]

Laying alone once again you didn’t come home

Wondering where you are and if something is wrong

Knowing the reality of it all you’re probably out having a ball

While I am sitting here worrying depressed and all alone

The worst thoughts running through my head

Could you be hurt or doing something that will hurt me in the end

After hours of painful thoughts and curiosity

I go to bed, and finally fall asleep

Next morning you come in

Tell me some crazy excuse

Even after the night of pain

I give in

And knowing it’s going to happen again

[ilovefatboyslol]

they that poem is good... i write poems 2

[urgrlnxtdoor]

that was REALLY good

[fisherman01]

excellent work

[Martal~Wombat]

great poem!
:)

[mag_tibi]

i know the feeling of wondering.. trying to figure out answers...expecting something.. but we only end up disappointed...hahah.. i like your poem. . .i can really relate myself. .

[yeknom]

i just like it! i like the end!

[willywilly99]

Brillaint poem

[know-your-role]

Poems suck, but that's my opinion:jumps:

[In2Deep]

Hey, I can most definitely feel where you are coming from. I'm young, and married and have experienced some lonely nights. Like you have received crazy likely, yet unlikely excuses. I don't know your relationship or if you're even still with this person, but all you can do is express yourself honestly and calmly. If this action persists then do what you feel you have to do. Just remember playing someone's fool is a choice. Do you ever feel as though you can't share any of the goings on with your friends or family? Any way that's why I joined this forum. Another thing that I did was pray that my husband stay safe and that the Lord SHOW what to do. If you're not to be together, then something will move you apart.

Get back to me. I posted something in the 20 something married life forum. We should chat!

[rosetaylor]

Yes,
I personally believe that you are right.
I will pray to god that you get what you want.
God bless you!

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