Dear God

[dustyleigh]

DEAR GOD:
Dear God,who watches over me,
please help me to solve this mystery.
i loved him once he broke my heart,
i love him still though were apart.
time heals all wounds so they say,
but the hurt and pain i still feel today.
please dear god help me to see,
why he no longer cares for me.
why does he make me feel this way,
feel the hurt and pain i feel today.
it's hard to forget the love that i feel,
because dear god i love him still.
now dear god i ask of you;
make him happy make him free,
erase all his memories all his memories of me.http://blue clouds

AMEN..

[dustyleigh]

[QUOTE=dustyleigh]DEAR GOD:
Dear God,who watches over me,
please help me to solve this mystery.
i loved him once he broke my heart,
i love him still though were apart.
time heals all wounds so they say,
but the hurt and pain i still feel today.
please dear god help me to see,
why he no longer cares for me.
why does he make me feel this way,
feel the hurt and pain i feel today.
it's hard to forget the love that i feel,
because dear god i love him still.
now dear god i ask of you;
make him happy make him free,
erase all his memories all his memories of me.http://blue clouds AMEN.

[Crazy_cutie]

nice poem. :)

[ajamnelson]

Hey I dont know you but I do know that
when your heartbroken it sucks I have been there more times then I have been in love, but I have learned throught my life that God does many things that seem strange and cruel and we dont know what they are till they smack us in the face....I bet you that if you step back and look at it all you will see that the man of your dreams is really a nightmare instead of focusing on him why not take some time for you....Get to know yourself and after that the men will line up,,,Trust me I know from experiance. Hang in there youre not alone at all

[young _ lean17]

that poem was ill!!!!! *thats good* that would make a decent country/rap song:) seriously

[Bubbiesdeployed]

I really enjoyed reading your poem. Keep writing!:fishy: