:P My poem.

[Crazy_cutie]

She swiftly dances across the room.
Straight and proper, she softly lands on
her pink ballet slippers.
A black chiffon skirt wraps around my
sister's petite waist and twirls with her.

Her sunflower hair, secured by a scarlet
elastic band, sways with each
graceful movement.
Under her big turquoise eyes,
freckles lightly sprinkle her nose.

This young girl's carefree smile reflects
her joy and lightheartedness.
Mariah will always dance like an angel.

what do you think?? I wrote this when I was 12.

[Crazy_cutie]

So what do you think???:)

[super_kool_kid2000]

Your poem rocks. That was the best poem i am only in 7th grade to and wooo that was awsome... LOVE IT :D:flying:

[Crazy_cutie]

aww thank you so much I wrote it when I was in grade 7 but im in grade 8 now. thanks again :)

[joker4lifead]

<b><font color=red>the poem is really good u should read some of mine</b></font>